Hi Adrienne, this was a great post, I loved how you started it with something that readers could easily relate to! I think you make some really good points throughout the post; however, I feel like you could expand on each of them a little more. In addition, you end your post by pointing out a flaw in your argument pushing for open data. While I think its important to offer counterarguments, I think that ending your article with one confuses the reader a little bit on the point that you are trying to make. I think moving this part to somewhere else in your post as well as offering even a small reassurance would strengthen your article while still maintaing the multifaceted argument you have created!

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